Nectar Posted January 22, 2005 Report Share Posted January 22, 2005 I will begin wid A Aansu moti hain,heera ye aansu... Chubte usko jiske behte ye aansu Pathar dil tu kya jaane...kitne chubte hain ye aansu Aansu paani hai, khara paani yeh Aansu Kuch Behte hain kuch Sukh Jaaten hain Aansu Ek toote Dil ki Kahani yeh aansu Kahaan nahi behte yeh aansu Aansu yeh aansu... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sukhi Posted January 23, 2005 Report Share Posted January 23, 2005 *ahem* roses are red, violets are purple. your poem made me cry, and i sobbed, "skurgurgle". *applause* thank you. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 24, 2005 Report Share Posted January 24, 2005 googlykaur ji, good. Are these lines composed by you, please? Here are my lines: - Hanereyaan Ch Raushani Mainu Vikhaa Riha. Eh Kaun Hai, Khaabaan Ch Jo Mere Hai Aa Riha? Sir Jhukaayee Sun Riha Hai Chauk Chaandani, Aare De Hethh Kaun Eh 'Jap Ji' Sunaa Riha? I have just composed these lines. The poem is not completed yet. . I hope this will be added on www.amritworld.com next month. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nectar Posted January 24, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2005 ji I do write thodi baut poems...kaddi..kaddi... 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 27, 2005 Report Share Posted January 27, 2005 Nice to hear Ji. Please share some of your 'shear' with us Ji. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nectar Posted January 28, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2005 sure wud par hale my internet is down ya ...I am @ a stupid cyber cafe...shers aka poems are at home... 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beast Posted January 28, 2005 Report Share Posted January 28, 2005 *ahem* roses are red, violets are purple. your poem made me cry, and i sobbed, "skurgurgle". *applause* thank you. you copycat. hmpfh. roses are red, violets are purple. a rat's breath stinks as does, erm....sukhi's too. *bigger applause* ithank you 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted January 28, 2005 Report Share Posted January 28, 2005 sure wud par hale my internet is down ya ...I am @ a stupid cyber cafe...shers aka poems are at home... Koi Gal Nahi Ji. All of us here on SikhAwareness.com are waiting for your poems Ji. . Zaraa Chheti Karna Ji. 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nectar Posted January 30, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2005 you copycat. hmpfh. roses are red, violets are purple. a rat's breath stinks as does, erm....sukhi's too. *bigger applause* ithank you What a stupid poem....Dishum...stop creating such a poetry.....The gr8 poets will commit suicide...the ones dead will chase u with a talwar...so beware Beast Singh :twisted: 0 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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